Mander the Charmander

[nishii]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,95%,true][atrb=align,center,true][bg=#bcbcbc] Mander " When life hands me lemons, I say thanks. " STARE AT THE ESSENTIAL QUALITIES ( the vicinity overflows with the lie. ) NAME: Mander NICKNAME(S)/ALIAS: None AGE: 0 years, 0 seasons BIRTHDAY: April 1 GENDER: Female TYPE: Fire LEVEL: 1 MOVES: Scratch Growl Belly Drum (egg move) --- THE LIVING THING IS COMPOSED OF PROTOPLASM ( the mind is sure to wake. ) PERSONALITY: LIKES: Sand Being carefree & Playing Blue things Bubbles Rocks Blaze; when she meets him DISLIKES: Water; of any kind The word 'No' The inability to see Dust & Sandstorms Being overwhelmed Being alone Losing HISTORY: CONCEALING YOUR SELF-CONTRADICTION ( will you continue displaying yourself? ) OOC NAME: Nishii CONTACT: PM me! NOTES: NO! :c THE DAYS YOU WISH FOR TO A SKY THAT WON'T ANSWER ( break them! this tainted heart and door of time. ) lyrics taken from PROTOPLASM by RENTRER EN SOI

[Mimi]

You need to make a few corrections.

but she has more courage than all of them combined.

This is a form of powerplaying, trying to make her the bravest, please rephrase it or change it.

Also she couldn't of found a tm on the beach. Pokemon only can know a tm on Oran island if their human taught it to them before they came to Oran island or if you buy it in the shop. You may also know the tm if it's an available egg move to the pokemon, but since you already have belly drum you can't have two egg moves.

[nishii]

Fixed it

Though I honestly didn't even connect that to power playing because I considered it to be a figure of speech.

Thanks for informing me though :3 this way I know for any future Pokemon I bring to this site.

[Mimi]

Accepted